| "Beloved," she said
with a smile of deep affection, "it has befallen me to speak a
hard thing to you. The truth is as you have feared it to be;
the Land has lost its power to remedy your illness, for much
great good has been undone by the Despiser."
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| -- The Wounded Land |
Before comparing and contrasting the strengths and weaknesses of
the First Chronicles of Thomas Covenant with the Second, let me
say I believe both of them are spectacular accomplishments in
their own right. Each series is a masterful exploration of new
lands and awesome challenges, replete with intriguing characters
and locales. Both are unified with a thoroughly unique
perspective and style that resonates with some and repulses
others.
Sense of wonder. I read fantasy literature to slip free
of daily life and explore strange new worlds through the eyes of
protagonists entirely different from me. In that sense the
First Chronicles engage me more deeply than the Second and are a
more satisfying reading experience. Although compared to nearly
any other significant fantasy novel or series the First
Chronicles would appear bleak and depressing, there are many
uplifting moments and discoveries. The introduction of Giants,
Ranyhyn, Bloodguard and the Earthservice of rhadhamaerl
and lillianrill, the glory of Revelstone, the sublimity
of Trothguard, the capture of the Staff of Law, the destruction
of the various Giant-Ravers ... I found them all inspiring and
thrilling. Each book, even Gilden Fire, is crowned by a
significant victory of good over evil, though Donaldson never
lets you forget these triumphs are dreadfully costly and in the
final scheme merely the momentary reprieve of a sandcastle
against a remorseless tide. Compared to that, the Second
Chronicles are almost unrelievedly grim and joyless. Instead
of new and wonderful peoples and locales, every step of the
journey is like a trip through a burned-out warehouse of
sickened and desecrated memories. The Land is wracked in ways
too heinous to be dreamed of in the First Chronicles, except
perhaps in the nightmares of High Lord Mhoram. Each new place
the Search visits greets them with foreboding and betrayal.
In the closing chapters of each book our heroes end up taking
another beating from a can of Lord Foul's inexhaustible supply
of Whoop-ass. The end of The Wounded Land finds a haggard and scarred crew
limping away from the Sunbane that has kicked their collective
teeth in. By the end of The One Tree so much physical and psychic
damage has been inflicted on the Quest you could almost forgive
them if they commited mass suicide. And even the ostensibly
triumphant and revelatory ending of the Second Chronicles is
somber.
Sense of perspectives. Another area in which I think the
First Chronicles excels is the shifting perspective of
protagonists among Thomas Covenant, Hile Troy, Lord Mhoram, the
Bloodguard, Triock and others. With each change in narration
the action is regenerated and fresh insights are gained into the
makeup and outlook of the Land's inhabitants. My favorite
moments in either series comes with Mhoram's introspection prior
to and during the siege of Revelstone and during Korik's mission
to Coercri. By contrast, the vast majority of the Second
Chronicles is viewed from either Thomas Covenant's or Linden
Avery's perspective. And both of these folks are continuously
discouraged, depressed and foul humored when not actually raging, unconscious,
envenomed, possessed, Raver-haunted or communing with the Dead.
Another significant drawback to the Second Chronicles sense of
perspective is the way in which its plot unfolds linearly. This
leads to a (perhaps intentional) sense that we're on a Death March
which limits the trilogy's scope ... something
Donaldson effortlessly transcended in the First Chronicles.
Sense of purpose. Somewhere along the way in the
Illearth War, probably during Runnik's tale to Hile Troy and
Lord Mhoram, Thomas Covenant's unbelief loses its last
thin shred of plausibility and becomes irrelevant. Certainly
when Gilden Fire is read the reader comes to that inescapable
conclusion. This monumental inconsistency completely
overshadows the tenuous and shaky "bargain" he strikes with
himself along the way to Melenkurion Skyweir. From this point
on, the First Chronicles' star protagonist lugs around a gaping
flaw in his central struggle (man against self, as they
used to say in Creative Writing class). How refreshing in the
Second Chronicles for Thomas Covenant to ditch that tired
argument and just settle down to kicking Foul's ass, regardless
of whether it's a dream.
Sense of self-reliance. The concept of Landservice
binding together the disparate peoples of the Land, giving them
purpose, identity, depth and sympathy is one of Donaldson's
master achievements in the First Chronicles. The Giants,
Haruchai, plainsmen, Stonedownors, Woodhelvennin, Ramen
and Ranyhyn, Waynhim, Unfettered Ones and Lords are vibrantly
alive and completely independent, yet defiantly united in the face of overwhelming odds. They are going
to hold out collectively and individually until every last life
is snuffed out. That alliance of the individual strengths of
good peoples fascinates me whether the Enemy is Lord Foul,
Morgoth, Sauron, the Dominator, or the Axis Powers of WW II.
It provides the reader a way to identify and ally himself or
herself with the various good guys, binding him or her that
much closer to the unfolding action. Who wouldn't want to be
a member of the Bloodguard, or a Lord fighting the good fight?
By the time of the Second Chronicles however this conception has
died a bitter death. The peoples of the Land have been remorselessly ground
down into such an abject state of self-loathing and servitude it is beyond
question they could possibly rally themselves against the Enemy.
It's up to Thomas Covenant and company to bail them out, with
some minor assistance along the way. That's the real reason I
prefer the First Chronicles, because the Land's inhabitants
during the Second Chronicles no longer surprise and engage me
on an emotional level the way they did before.
As another pitch for the idea of a Third Chronicles, I think
the various peoples of the Land during the days of Berek,
Damelon, Loric and Kevin would be even more vital and interesting
than they were in the First Chronicles, allowing the enemies of
the Land to be even stronger and more evil, and the crescendo of
the series to be that much more dramatic.